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Some people prefer to carefully plan activities in their free time while others think it’s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion ?

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Some personality types like to invest in building a clear vision of what they will do on their off days, While I stand with
this
 mindset,
however
, others can look at it as not a wise strategy. In
this
 essay, I will show why I support
this
 view while presenting the other side too. Some personality types like to invest
on
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in
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 building a clear vision of what they will do on their off days, While I stand with
this
 mindset,
however
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,however
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 others can look at it as not a wise strategy. In
this
 essay, I will show why
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
 support
this
 view while presenting the other side too. Some personality types like to invest
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
 building a clear vision of what they will do on their off days, While I stand with
this
 mindset,
however
Add the comma(s)
,however
show examples
 others can look at it as not a wise strategy. In
this
 essay, I will show why
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
 support
this
 view while presenting the other side too.
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