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Some people suggest that regular driving tests should be taken by people, to reduce the number of accidents, throughout their lives rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the present scenario, every person prefers to drive their own vehicle.
Although
,
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 it is sometimes thought regular driving
test
 is a good way to reduce the number of accidents, others believe a single
test
 is enough to get a driving licence. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the merits of a single
test
 and the demerits of repeating a driving
test
. There are many reasons why
people
 should give a single driving
test
. The
first
 and foremost important thing is that they can prove their driving abilities after attempting one
test
.
For example
, in a fast-paced life,
people
 are busy in their routine life and they do not have time to give a
test
 on a regular basis.
Therefore
, a single
test
 is beneficial and convenient. Another point to consider is that why a single
test
 would be enough to judge the driving of
people
 means
people
 already gain experience a lot of hours before getting a full licence.
For instance
, in Australia, learners should complete 120 hours of driving in supervision and are shown in their logbooks. After that process, they are eligible to give a driving
test
.
Hence
, every country has a proper and good system giving full licence after following all procedures.
On the other hand
, I do not think repeating the driving
test
 has advantages.
People
 who are driving along while but sometimes they meet with an accident. so, no one can say experienced
people
 do not meet with accidents.
Moreover
, the regular
test
 is
also
 a time waste for both the government as well as
people
.
In addition
, the government should organise more staff, if there is a repeating exam.
People
 have to wait for a long time to give an exam and it is
also
 a negative point of regular exams. In conclusion, a single
test
 has lots of benefits rather to a regular driving
test
.
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