some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Friendship is
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of the important aspects of human life. some
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believe that it's much better to be
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with like-minded opinions while others believe it's good to have
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who occasionally don't agree with all their views.
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will lead to a logical conclusion.
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friends
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with the same thinking can help in certain ways
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an interesting topic, getting help to get over a certain event, and so on.
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can simply rely on at least
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of his/her close
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when it comes to winning an argument in the debate.
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minded
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will always take each other's side, they will
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share a mutual understanding of
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's perception over a certain topic. To cite an example, If a debate is going on over whether or not sugar is good for health, those with
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will more or less think on the same points to discuss without even preparing in advance.
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who choose to be
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with not so similar
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of the world as theirs have a slight edge when it comes to learning something new. A person whose perception is different will look at the same problem with an alternative solution which might help
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understand the actual situation of the topic.
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, If a person thinks that a glass of water is half empty, it may happen that someone thinks that the glass is half full.
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way constructive feedback helps
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get some new experiences which in turn helps them in life at a later stage. so, in a nutshell, according to the arguments aforementioned above, I think that sometimes having a mix of
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with
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same and different
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can help
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get both
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experiences. Depending upon the situation
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can choose to pick a friend who is most preferable to discuss the problem with.
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way
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can maintain a balance and live a happy life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
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  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
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