The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that the aver standard of an individual's well-being condition is likely to be less in the upcoming years as compared to the present. On the whole, I do agree with
this
given statement to a great extent but in certain ,circumstances it is not valid which would be discussed in the following paragraphs with the relevant examples.
Even though, medical science invented incredible machines and medicines round the clock to increase the life
expectancy of an individual. However
, the normal level of individual health conditions is likely to be Lower in future in comparison to now.Probably, the most prominent reason to believe this
is there is extreme
level of workplace stress in everyone's Add an article
an extreme
the extreme
life
. In other words
. Everyone wants to earn more money to afford all luxuries of life
such
as automatic cars and branded clothes. To meet the needs, they try to work overnight. Ultimately, this
action puts negative
impact on Add an article
a negative
employee 's
health in form of various diseases Fix the agreement mistake
employees'
such
as diabetes, obesity and reduce health's condition.
In addition
to it, every sphere of life
is changing and quality of environment
, Add an article
the environment
Food
material is not an exception. Add an article
the Food
Purity
of air, water, soil Correct article usage
The purity
are
deteriorating every single day. Even the food we eat contains a lot of chemicals, pesticides and full of impurities which Change the verb form
is
consequently
capable of making us sick. It Add a missing verb
are consequently
also
make
us prone to different diseases Change the verb form
makes
such
as asthma, cancer and liver problems .For instance
, Delhi is most
polluted city in Correct article usage
the most
the
India and Correct article usage
apply
average
Correct article usage
the average
life
expectancy of Delhi's people is lower than rest
of the world.
To conclude, Correct article usage
the rest
although
medical advancements are proven to be boon
for humanity Correct article usage
a boon
but
somewhere they are unable to combat the negative effects of other factors like Remove the conjunction
apply
worktlife
stress and Correct your spelling
work-life
work life
environment
pollution.Replace the word
environmental
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