Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals to tackle this issue?

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greenhouse effect
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deforestation
fossil fuel combustion
industrial pollution
environmental regulations
emission standards
renewable energy sources
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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals to tackle this issue?

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. DO the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?