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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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The
last
 statistic shows that
e-
books
 are commonly used than paper
books
.
Thus
, society has not shared the same opinion about the usage of
books
, some of them think e-book is significant innovation but others suppose that it will never replace real
books
. In my opinion,
e-
books
 provide us with many conveniences despite they have disadvantages. According to my, the main advantage of electronic
books
 is portable so, if your device has enough memory, you can carry as large as a whole library in your pocket.
Moreover
,
e-
books
 have a search engine which, can help us easily find appropriate information within thousands of
books
.
Lastly
,
e-
books
 are considered safer against the risk of loss, theft, and wear of
books
. Despite all advantages of electronic,
books
 there are some disadvantages and one of them is it is unhealthy for our eyes to look at a screen for more than two hours.
For example
, the people who stare at the screen for a long time their eyes
are
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 getting red and feel an itch on their eyes. Another disadvantage is devices which we are using for reading are too expensive and fragile. We should always be careful when we use it and
this
 situation decries the quality of reading. In conclusion, even when
e-
books
 are portable and they have lots of software innovation which it safe us our time, in, addition they much safer than normal
books
 to save information.
However
, they might
also
 affect people's health and poor ones who cannot afford
books
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Portability
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Environmental conservation
  • Tactile experience
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Digital fatigue
  • Prolonged screen time
  • Technical issues
  • Independent bookstores
  • Piracy issues
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