During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter - remind him when and where you met - tell him what kind of job you are interested in -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Hope you and your family are doing amazing. I am glad to tell you that I am interested in the job offer that you have given me during our plan journey. I Manvir Kaur met you on an Air India flight from Delhi to Chandigarh

last

week. We spent nearly the whole journey while discussing the economical condition of India. It was an incredible experience for a youngster like me who had just finished his graduation in cooking. I am looking for a job as a chef. It would

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be fine if I got a few months of assistant at your restaurant before making any

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. Even I am

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of all ingredients that are mainly used in Italian dishes. In fact, I have recently completed my baking course

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. All these factors really made me a perfect fit for

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job. I hope you will take all my points into consideration and please give me

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opportunity to work in your restaurant. Yours Sincerely Manvir Kaur

Submitted by Manvir kaur bhatti on Sun Dec 26 2021

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

175 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

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