During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter - remind him when and where you met - tell him what kind of job you are interested in -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Hope you and your family are doing amazing. I am glad to tell you that I am interested in the job offer that you have given me during our plan journey. I Manvir Kaur met you on an Air India flight from Delhi to Chandigarh

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week. We spent nearly the whole journey while discussing the economical condition of India. It was an incredible experience for a youngster like me who had just finished his graduation in cooking. I am looking for a job as a chef. It would

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be fine if I got a few months of assistant at your restaurant before making any

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ready to do a few months

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of all ingredients that are mainly used in Italian dishes. In fact, I have recently completed my baking course

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. All these factors really made me a perfect fit for

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job. I hope you will take all my points into consideration and please give me

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opportunity to work in your restaurant. Yours Sincerely Manvir Kaur

Manvir kaur bhattiSun Dec 26 2021

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

175 words

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