Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some
people
that companies should increase the Use synonyms
cost
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products
with high levels of Use synonyms
sugar
to mitigate associated Use synonyms
health
issues. I completely disagree with Use synonyms
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proposal since it is impossible to make every sugary product more expensive and crimes could be encouraged.
To commence with, it should be remembered that Linking Words
sugar
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, even in natural ones like fruits and nuts. If Use synonyms
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suggestion is accepted and Linking Words
food
providers increase the prices of their Use synonyms
products
, every single product may have to have its Use synonyms
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rise
, as they contain either natural or artificial sweeteners. Use synonyms
This
may not bring about the desired effect as Linking Words
people
might consider the Use synonyms
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products
as financially related and not for bettering their Use synonyms
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, they might continue to consume the insidious sweet Linking Words
products
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For instance
, if there is a sudden Linking Words
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cost
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food
and beverages which is rich in Use synonyms
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people
will likely think the Use synonyms
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of raw Use synonyms
sugar
has surged and will keep purchasing the Use synonyms
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.
Another reason for not making sugary Use synonyms
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more expensive is that it encourages crimes Use synonyms
such
as robberies and shoplifting. Linking Words
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is primarily because even though being detrimental to Linking Words
people
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health
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sugar
still plays a vital role in ensuring the human body functions properly and preventing us from certain ailments. Use synonyms
In other words
, human needs it to survive and live healthily. Linking Words
Food
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with higher costs may not be affordable for those with low income and they may end up robbing it to maintain their Use synonyms
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For example
, when fruits were made pricier in Vietnam, many poor Linking Words
people
robbed them from the local market since they could not afford them.
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costs more may not lead to the Use synonyms
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people
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products
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Make sure to clearly structure your essay by logically organizing your argument with a clear introduction, supporting paragraphs, and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices effectively to guide the reader through your points seamlessly.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite