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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Good
health
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 is a blessing. It has been observed that the average
health
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 standard of people is getting compromised and expect a massive decline in future.
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 essay strongly agrees with the statement because of the large consumption of processed
food
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 and the constant use of
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 in the agriculture
industry
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. On the one hand, it has been evident that
health
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 issues are constantly growing and many novel diseases dominate the world.
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 is because of constant ignorance towards a healthy and freshly prepared diet. Parents and couples are so busy with their hectic schedules that they do not have enough time to prepare home-cooked
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.
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, they completely rely on processed and half-cooked
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. One
such
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 example we experienced in our daily life is the eating of doughnuts, pasta and other processed
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 These foods are lack
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proper nutrition and have a high content of sodium and sugar which ultimately leads to various
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 diseases.
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, the
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industry
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 is driven by high-profit margins. The agriculture
industry
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 is heavily using
chemicals
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 and hormones to grow all types of fruits, vegetables, staples and cereals during the offseason.
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, many off seasonal foods are available for consumers all year round and people are consuming them without considering their side effects.
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,
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 items like Mangoes, capsicum, and cabbages are using high doses of
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 that are altering the genetic composition of the human body.
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, diseases like thyroid and diabetes are prevalent among people irrespective of age group. To conclude, scientists, agriculturists and governments should work in coordination to control the high usage of
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 by the
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industry
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 and encourage them to use natural
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 without altering its composition.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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