Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe the Government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Goods transportation and human

activities

have been proved to be the main culprits behind

pollution

,

one

of the most concerning problems in recent years.

However

, it is still a matter of debate as to whether the

government

or individuals are the

o

ne

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to blame for

this

problem. In my opinion,

authorities

should take t

he g

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reater responsibility for doing harm to the

environment

. On the

one

hand, each individual should be the

one

in charge of

activities

that have adverse impacts on the

environment

. Though being encouraged to make green habits in order to enhance the environmental quality, not many

people

are willing to adopt them.

For instance

, the number of private vehicles, which are the main source of exhaust emissions, would remarkably drop if more

people

chose to use public transports.

Consequently

,

this

will minimize the negative effects on the

environment

thanks to the reduced amounts of toxic pollutants.

However

, there is still a large proportion of

people

opting for private vehicles due to their convenience, showing no environmental awareness. Those

people

, for that reason, should be in charge of magnifying the detrimental impacts of

pollution

.

On the other hand

, it is clear that the

government

plays no lesser role in making the situation worse. It has been demonstrated that

pollution

is attributed to the inefficient transportation of products, which is under the control of the

authorities

. Had they had a better regulation on product transportation flow, the carbon footprint produced from

this

activity could be dramatically reduced, which partly mitigates the severity of air

pollution

.

In addition

to

this

, it is the

government

w

ho

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has the power to impose the restrictions on environmentally unfriendly

activities

and e

nsures

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citizens follow them.

Therefore

,

authorities

without the ability to devise a

n efficient traffic schemes

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should undeniably take the responsibility for social

activities

causing serious environmental issues. In conclusion, harmful

activities

that destroy the

environment

belong to both the

government

and individuals from my perspective of view.

However

, the

authorities

with their inefficient management are the

o

ne

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making m

ore

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substantial contribution to the poor situation of

pollution

.