Because of modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. discuss both and give your opinion on your experience.

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handwritten
skills
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some folks believe that it has been so many advantages to
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technology
rather
then
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handwritten
skills
,
however
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some think that it has still popular and as vital as it was previously.
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, before commenting on my decision, both views will be analysed. On the one hand, some groups said that
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no
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to learn handwriting
skills
because of technological advancement.
This
is because people can
use
gadgets anytime they want
insted
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instead
of old fashioned
paper
and pen.
Further
to
this
, the main merits are they can save things for
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period of time without depending on
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.
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, people could
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for their work while they aren't at
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just to help their colleagues and even they let them
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the other hand, notes of
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written by hand has still
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own shines, like offer letters, thesis notes and many more.
In
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anyone can
use
this
master skill whenever they need
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for that what they need is pen and
paper
,
eventhough
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even though
without having laptops or any systems. Sometimes
technology
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in between but handwritten notes
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benefits.
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or if they
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recommendations they will definitely need pan and papers at that time they cannot
use
gadgets. To conclude
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give my opinion,
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would surely support the latter opinion more than the former because still pen and
paper
has
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its own vital role
then
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technology
. Like using computers
yiu
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you
can save
date
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for
long
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time but
withiut
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without
handwritten
skills
you cannot do a single task.
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