Write a letter to the company from which you bought online product and you are very disappointed with the product and give the detail of the product that you bought and after that you have to give the thing that you want to replace or why you did not like the product and the and what do you expect from that company to give you back?

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Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your attention an issue regarding the substandard quality of the juicer grinder, which has caused considerable inconvenience. I bought

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mixer from your company.

Last

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month, I purchased an electric grinder from your official website by paying

full

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the full

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cost.

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that, I opted for an additional

two year

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two-year

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warranty card for

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culinary item. Regrettably, the order I received was faulty as it had some scratches on the glass jars.

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, its motor machine stopped working properly

that

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apply

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made

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making

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it impossible to blend or grind the ingredients.

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, I tried to contact your customer service department but they refused me to give any refund or replacement. So, I kindly request you

do please

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resolve

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issue promptly. I have all the invoices of purchase and extra insurance fees that

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can provide it you if you want to confirm.If it is possible to exchange

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recent kitchen appliance

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for

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the

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brand new

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one or

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kindly give me back my complete refund. Thank you for giving attention to

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matter. Yours faithfully, Sarab

Submitted by sarabjeetk8899 on Sun Nov 24 2024

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task achievement

You have provided a complete response and clearly stated your complaint about the product. Ensure that your letter remains concise and to the point to maintain clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Try to maintain a logical flow throughout your paragraphs to enhance coherence. Each paragraph should ideally cover one main idea. In this case, segregating the purchase details and the issues faced could help improve clarity.

coherence and cohesion

The letter is well-structured with a clear opening and closing, which enhances readability.

task achievement

You have maintained a formal tone throughout your letter, which is appropriate for a complaint letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

181 words

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