In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In many places around the world, a large number of people believe that huge amounts of funds should be spent to construct high-speed railway lines between cities.
However
, there are others who believe that using
this
fund to upgrade existing public transportation systems is a better idea.
This
essay will look at both sides and
then
attempt to reach a conclusion.
To begin
with, it is clear that fast trains would make travelling between cities much easier. In fact, it can be faster than travelling by plane because you do not have to wait so long at the airport.
Moreover
, train travel is generally cheaper than travelling by train, which will allow more people to travel than before.
Nevertheless
, the cost of constructing a long-distance train system is very high and
this
capital could be used in a more effective way.
This
leads to the idea of using the fund to improve current public transport.
For instance
,
although
public transportation is seen as environmentally friendly, many old buses produce a lot of smoke, and
this
could be solved by spending funds on electric buses that do not produce harmful emissions.
Furthermore
, current public transport is what people use every day, so it makes sense to improve
this
rather than build a new structure that might not be used so much. Overall, a high-speed rail system is a great way to connect a country and even a group of countries.
However
, if funding is an issue, it is better to improve the current system to a high standard before taking on a new plan.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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