The internet contains a lot of information. However, sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Undoubtedly, the web world has a vast amount of
information
available. But,
this
information
can be false too. I definitely agree with
this
statement to some extent.
Modern
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world has seen
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of dependence on
the
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web usage for day to day queries of life.
This
reliance is posing threat as it comes with its own risks.
For example
, when a person suffers from even any mild symptom, he or she would look out on social media for its possible causes and get really worried.
Although
it might be only a headache, its causes, diagnosis and treatment options look troublesome and expensive.
This
is because
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the huge
information
relating to different people with different health problems is easily accessible, people tend to forget that each individual is different from one another.
Secondly
, the selection of educational
institute
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is being done on the account of google reviews and ratings. Here, there can be a business trick of providing students with extra study material or tutoring in order to bring goodwill to the organisation.
Hence
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very easy to fall into
this
trap which is done through false and fraud marketing.
Moreover
, the computerised world
also
presents a variety of
diy
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DIY
(do it yourself) ideas but some of them have turned out wrong and extremely dangerous. The kids and teenagers are mostly attracted towards them and in the absence of any instruction regarding parental guidance required, they perform these experiments and suffer horribly.
Although
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there are many negative consequences of
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amount of internet
information
, it has become an
absolue
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absolute
necessity.
Hence
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it has to be used carefully taking into the aspect of safety, security, reliability and many more.
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  • cybersecurity
  • phishing
  • identity theft
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • social isolation
  • internet addiction
  • data privacy
  • digital literacy
  • regulations
  • awareness programs
  • manipulate
  • proliferation
  • consent
  • escalated
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