Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

“If you talk to a man in a
language
he understands that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own
language
,
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go to his heart
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” said Nelson
Manela
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Mandela
. By the meaning of
this
famous quote, we can clearly see that speaking
foreign
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language
or speaking someone own
language
to them is the best way to understand and enter their soul. With the developing speech of the world nowadays, knowing
other
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language
can bring you many opportunities as studying abroad, international trading and especially
immigrade
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immigrate
to a more developing
country
with a better life standard.
However
, sustainably living in a foreign
country
can lead to social and practical problems which significantly can be seen in communication. Misunderstanding is the most common
difficulties
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in social
problem
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problems
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.
Imaging
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living in
foreign
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a foreign
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country
, you still have to hang out, earn a living, meet your partners or your boss which is difficult in the early time because each
languages
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has
it
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its
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own unique, tone or slang. These acknowledge wait be taught at school or English centre where you had studied to prepare for
this
new life and “cost goes before the profit".
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,
this
can lead to diminishing your speech,
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the apposite person cant understand what do you try to say and even get
misprehension
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misapprehension
.
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startistic
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statistic
statistics
or news show that when a foreign people try to
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that
country
’s
language
that they
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to but in a wrong way and
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purpose
propose
they get in big trouble. If social problems were more physically tendency
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practical issues directly connected to our mental health.
Firstly
, you’ll feel out of space living in a
country
that nobody
around
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and speak your mother
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tongue
, who are you can share can express your feelings, you could feel isolated the early time and find it hard to make friends.
This
problem
lead
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to 2 serious issues which are failure of
culture
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identity and losing yourself. As I’ve discussed before, when you feel out of space and hard to make friends, you have to adapt which is
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yourself and
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behavior
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, habits,
favor
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to fit those new friends or company environment.
Imagining
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living in a foreign
country
for years and
then
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back to your hometown, you are amid the alien corn in both verbal communication and your hometown’s nature people. In conclusion,
mimmigrate
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immigrate
immigrated
to a foreign
country
gives you tons of opportunities and
better
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life standard but every nation
have
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it
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own unique in languages, culture, spread your unique
language
worldwide and remember not to forget your mother
touge
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tongue
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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