In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that as the technology has developed, in the future new
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cars will be released and only travellers will be the passengers on the backseat. While
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can bring some immediate drawbacks, I consider
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more likely to have
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in people's lives. On the one side of the argument, in the
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, there are several potential drawbacks. Primarily, due to the developmental stage of the driver program, it will have some bugs which may cause some traffic congestion, and even crashes,
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these problems will be solved, gradually, in a few
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Furthermore
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, some misunderstandings might be possible between
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and passengers about the location.
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, if a passenger cannot explain the location where he tends to go
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, the computer ought to bring people to
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wrong place unconsciously.
On the other hand
, there are
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benefits of
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development.
Firstly
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robots have no feeling of being exhausted and error rate, which will increase the effectiveness of the transportation.
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, people who want to travel are not going to spend their valuable time
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driving,
instead
of it they can utilize their time by other activities like
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watching
films or completing their work.
Finally
, thanks to the electronic maps, robots
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are able to opt
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way.
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, a human driver is not able to know the location of congestion and density, and he, probably will
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in traffic for hours. In conclusion,
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the drawbacks, I believe that on the long-term view these are
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outweighed
by the advantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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