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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

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 day and age, we are living in a world where digital
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 technology has an impact on human's life. Some
people
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 considered that technology may bring detrimental impacts to social bonds with each other. In my opinion, I partly disagree with
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 view because online meetings may have some benefits. On the one hand, undoubtedly, technological development in
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 enhances social association a lot. It is because online
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 helps
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 to connect across borders without the need of travelling.
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 can use digital platforms
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 as Skype, Facebook or Facetime to interact with their families or relatives who live far from them by only smart devices and wifi connections.
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 convenient way helps them to maintain their relationships when they do not have conditions to gather or meet their relatives, especially in the lockdown or the social distancing of the Covid-19 pandemic.
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, the digital connections made
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 socially inactive these days compared to the past.
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 situation happened because humans are over-reliance on the convenience of online
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 and social networks.
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 of hanging out or having face-to-face meetings with friends like in the past, children nowadays spend most of their time chatting and watching channels.
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, their attention to do physical activities
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 much more leser, which leads to obesity, laziness, stress due to their sedentary lifestyle. In conclusion, I believe modern
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 are helping to make certain situations better even though there are some drawbacks.
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, it is the responsibility of each individual to adjust and balance their reliance on modern
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 technology.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • face-to-face interactions
  • messaging apps
  • social media
  • non-verbal cues
  • family bonds
  • dependency
  • digital communication
  • superficial relationships
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • social isolation
  • virtual connections
  • emotional satisfaction
  • real-life interactions
  • technological intrusion
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