Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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museums and
art
galleries
in
this
world whilst some have lodge
entry
fees
and some are not having any admission
fees
. I ponder that having
a
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entry fees
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entry
fees
in these infrastructures may have more advantages than disadvantages. To commence with the myriad reasons
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why museums and
art
galleries
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charges on admission. Primarily, in these types of public places, numbers of
people
visting
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visiting
there not only for entertainment but
also
to increase their knowledge as well as these famous
galleries
also
act as
eye- catching
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for international
tourist
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, so having
a
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entry
fee from the foreigner
also
help in burgeoning the economy of a country.
For instance
, the famous building in
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known as 'The Taj Mahal' in which various
people
from another country have been visited to see their different work of
art
, which
infact
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in fact
help in boost the gross domestic product.
Additionally
,
by
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lodging
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a
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entry
fees
in
art
galleries
may lead to less crowding which
further
help in
protection
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the protection
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of
artifacts
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artefacts
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as only
intersted
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interested
people
will pay
entry
fee rather than non-
intersted
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interested
people
.
Moreover
,
people
ought to obey the rules and regulations and there will be more discipline among
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and adults. Even though, the amount collected from
entry
could be used in maintenance and improvement of museums and
art
galleries
.
For example
, many reports illustrate that most of the charge
meuseum
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museum
in Delhi are well conserved and
offering
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a better experience. To conclude, from the
above mentioned
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reasons that charge on
entry
fee having
innumberable
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innumerable
advantages like help in boosting country economy,
maintances
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maintenance
of discipline and collected money will be used in renovations .
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