Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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the numerous
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museums and Correct quantifier usage
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art
galleries
in this
world whilst some have lodge entry
fees
and some are not having any admission fees
. I ponder that having a
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entry fees
an entry fee
entry
fees
in these infrastructures may have more advantages than disadvantages.
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apply
art
galleries
having
charges on admission. Primarily, in these types of public places, numbers of Wrong verb form
have
people
visting
there not only for entertainment but Correct your spelling
visiting
also
to increase their knowledge as well as these famous galleries
also
act as eye- catching
for international Add a hyphen
eye-catching
tourist
, so having Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
a
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an
entry
fee from the foreigner also
help in burgeoning the economy of a country. For instance
, the famous building in agra
known as 'The Taj Mahal' in which various Change the capitalization
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people
from another country have been visited to see their different work of art
, which infact
help in boost the gross domestic product.
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in fact
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, by
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apply
lodging
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a
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apply
entry
fees
in art
galleries
may lead to less crowding which further
help in protection
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the protection
artifacts
as only Change the spelling
artefacts
intersted
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interested
people
will pay entry
fee rather than non-intersted
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interested
people
. Moreover
, people
ought to obey the rules and regulations and there will be more discipline among individual's
and adults. Even though, the amount collected from Change the noun form
individuals
individual
entry
could be used in maintenance and improvement of museums and art
galleries
. For example
, many reports illustrate that most of the charge meuseum
in Delhi are well conserved and Correct your spelling
museum
offering
a better experience.
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above mentioned
reasons that charge on Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
entry
fee having innumberable
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maintances
of discipline and collected money will be used in renovations .Correct your spelling
maintenance
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