Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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museums and

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galleries

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world whilst some have lodge

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why museums and

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charges on admission. Primarily, in these types of public places, numbers of

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visiting

there not only for entertainment but

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for international

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fee from the foreigner

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help in burgeoning the economy of a country.

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known as 'The Taj Mahal' in which various

people

from another country have been visited to see their different work of

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help in boost the gross domestic product.

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art

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may lead to less crowding which

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as only

intersted

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people

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people

ought to obey the rules and regulations and there will be more discipline among

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and adults. Even though, the amount collected from

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could be used in maintenance and improvement of museums and

art

galleries

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museum

in Delhi are well conserved and

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a better experience. To conclude, from the

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reasons that charge on

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fee having

innumberable

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innumerable

advantages like help in boosting country economy,

maintances

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maintenance

of discipline and collected money will be used in renovations .

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Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved? Write at least 250 words.

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for the society. Others think it has benefits for the society. To what extent do you think the advantages overweigh disadvantages?

School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree?