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There is no denying the fact that money plays a crucial role in our lives. Children are too young to.

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It is believed by most
parents
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 that teaching the importance of
money
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 to
children
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 at a young age is necessary. I completely agree with that view and will give my opinion in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, most kids today often do not understand the value of
money
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.
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 often comes from their families, some
parents
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 think that
children
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 are too young to understand about
money
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, or some are too busy to teach them.
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,
children
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 will tend to be wasteful, looking down on some things or some kind of people.
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, most
children
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 immediately want a toy or food as soon as they see it and they throw angry if their desire is not fulfilled. They do not care if the
parents
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 have the resources to buy them what they want, in some cases when they are not met by their
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, it
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 leads to negative actions. It is necessary to teach they know how much hard work goes into earning each penny. Only
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 they would appreciate the things which they have.
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,
children
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also
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 need to be taught the wisdom of handling
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.
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, they will not be deceived by bad intentions, nor will they suffer
financial
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 crisis in their adulthood. Families need to teach them how to save and manage
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 well.
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,
parents
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 should assign household chores to their
children
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 and reward them when finished.
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, kids will respect what they do, work harder and try to save. Just like that, in the
future
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 they will become independent people and often wise against bad temptations. To summarize, it is essential to teach
children
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 about the value of
money
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 from an early age. That brings so many good benefits to their future.

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