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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Living in a foreign country may cause some social and practical issues for most migrants who have to speak a foreign
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. I completely agree with
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 view. There are several social problems regarding speaking a foreign
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. When travellers have to speak a
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language
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, which they do not master, they may face difficulties in interacting with native people. So, they usually can not make friends easily from their workplace to university.
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, there are some local people who mock the accent or the
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 mistakes of foreigners. Undoubtedly,
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 is impolite and annoying behaviour. All these factors cause migrant to feel loneliness and eventually depression so that they sometimes regret immigrating.
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, many foreigners
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 struggle with some practical problems. Some of them usually have difficulties in finding jobs because the majority of employers prefer to hire candidates who are able to speak and interact with clients without misunderstandings. In other, the lacking of a foreign
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 skill may result in some trouble in the workplace.
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, it is likely that a foreign waiter or waitress takes an order mistakenly at a restaurant.
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, immigrants may get into trouble in meeting their needs.
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, when they. Want to rent a place, they may probably do not understand all the rules mentioned in the contract.
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 may cause them to break some rules unintentionally. In conclusion, in my point of view, speaking a foreign lang may be accompanied by various practical and social problems.
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, migrants should reduce
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 issues by trying to learn the
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 of a foreign country in which they are living as soon as possible

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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