You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have hand to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library. In you letter, you should: explaining the situation apologize for the inconvenience called and say what you are going to do
Dear sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing Linking Words
this
letter to let you know that I issued some books from the college library that I failed to submit Linking Words
into
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the due
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because I had to leave for my home, as my mother suffered a heart attack and she was admitted Remove the comma
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into
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a
hospital.
I am very ashamed Correct article usage
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for
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of
this
conduct of mine and I offer my sincere apologies. Linking Words
This
has happened for the very first time that I failed to return books in time, Linking Words
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unavoidable circumstances at my home.
In order, to make up for my misconduct, I am ready to pay the applicable fine and I assure you that it will never happen in future again. Correct article usage
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Lastly
, I again apologise for Linking Words
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conduct of mine. I hope you will understand my Linking Words
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and forgive me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully,
Jatinder.Fix the agreement mistake
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task achievement
While the letter is clear and covers all the required points, some of the sentences could be more fluid. Consider revising sentences for smoother transitions and a more natural flow.
coherence cohesion
You have effectively organized the letter, but the transition between the explanation and the apology could be smoother. Try to connect the sections more seamlessly.
coherence cohesion
'I hope this letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health.' can be rephrased to sound more natural. Consider using 'I hope this letter finds you well.'
task achievement
You've done a good job explaining your situation clearly, which makes the letter easily understandable.
task achievement
You've used a polite and respectful tone, which is appropriate for this kind of letter.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is generally well-organized with a clear greeting, body, and closing.