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n many countries, it is common for people to consume fast food. However, some people believe that fast food has too much influence on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In modern ,society
people
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 tend to consume fast
food
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 very often.
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, regular consumption of junk
food
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 causes a detrimental impact on our health and
lifestyle
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. In
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 ,essay l am going to comment on the role of fast
food
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 in our lives and its impact. At present
people
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 are very busy with their jobs, studies, and so many other things.
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, relying on fast
food
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 is a very common scenario nowadays. Because, it does not take much time to prepare, or can buy already prepared ones. In many ,countries street
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 stalls are very popular among
people
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. They can buy whatever they like to eat for a cheap amount.
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, fast
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 consumption has become a major part of
people
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's complex lifestyles. Even junk
food
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 helps to ease our lives, it causes a bad impact on our
lifestyle
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 and diet. Because
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food
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 mainly contains fat, calories, and sugar. To maintain a healthy body we should take carbohydrates, proteins, fats, and vitamins. But
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 of that junk
food
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 contains lots of unhealthy
ingredients
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, as well as cancerous
ingredients
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. Especially in developing countries, Ajinomoto is commonly used in street
food
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 preparation, which has been identified as one of the main cancer-causing
ingredients
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 use in
food
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 preparation. Other than that some colouring agents
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 and aromatic agents used in fast
food
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 have been identified as unhealthy
ingredients
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. Due to the increased consumption of fast ,
,
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food
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 most
people
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 suffer from cancers, obesity, high blood pressure, and some other health issues. So it is very clear that fast
food
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 has altered human's healthy
lifestyle
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. ,
Eventually
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 l would like to conclude that, even with the busy
lifestyle
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people
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 should manage to get a healthy diet rather than rely on fast
food
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.
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 they can stay healthy for a long period.
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