There is too much noise in many public places in cities. 
What are the causes of this problem?
What can be done to solve the problem?

According to WHO,
noise
pollution
is the
second
highest cause of diseases after air
pollution
. The majority of citizens are suffering from
this
issue in the public spaces of modern
cities
.  In
this
essay, I will illustrate the underlying reasons for the increase in
noise
pollution
and offer some advice on how to tackle
this
issue. One primary reason is the increasing population density.
People
are willing to move to big
cities
due to several reasons.
Firstly
, there are various work opportunities and better offers in the
cities
.
Furthermore
, convenient life functions are a plus on why
people
would like to live in the
cities
rather than the countryside. The greater number of those who live in towns, the more
noise
is produced and
this
situation will worsen as urban populations continue to grow rapidly. One possible approach would be for governments to promote and encourage
people
to settle down in the countryside by providing necessary facilities and public transportation. In the short term, urban populations might be reduced.
However
, the number of commuters will increase.  Another significant reason why
people
are suffering from
noise
pollution
is
vehicles
. It is undeniable that
cities
are always jam-packed with personal
vehicles
in rash hours. Transportation
such
as buses, metros, and cars produce heavy
noise
and
people
are unescapable from
this
kind of
noise
. The most effective solution is to use less noisy
vehicles
such
as bicycles or take public transportation
instead
of driving private cars. In the long term,
this
might reduce
noise
pollution
and air
pollution
as well. Overall, reducing the urban population and utilising less noisy
vehicles
would be possible solutions to rescue
people
suffering from
noise
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • urbanization
  • population density
  • traffic congestion
  • infrastructure development
  • public announcement systems
  • street performances
  • noise regulations
  • soundproof materials
  • public transportation
  • designated quiet zones
  • green spaces
  • buffer zones
  • public awareness
  • community efforts
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