Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days we have a big argument about

children

's rights to make errors. Some people think that

children

must have their own discussion. While the other side of opinion, believe we must control. in

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essay writing below to discuss both ideas and share my opinion.

First

of all, many people think that

children

can learn from their own attempts. So we must give them the chance to try and fail or try and succeed. They will be more confident about these things if they fail and try again,

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the studies in 2003 tell that we must

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give

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chance.

However

, other persons believe that we must control the

children

and try to watch them and

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everything and prevent them from doing anything bad to keep them safe. To sum up, some persons think that controlling

children

is good for them while the other

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people think that giving them the freedom to try and

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have more advantages and benefits. In my opinion, we must consider both and give

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freedom to our

children

to have errors while we are watching them

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will keep them save same time give them a chance to discover their world.