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Has the internet made us more lazy or efficent? do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, a lot of humans devote most of their moments to the
internet
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, some
people
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 assume that the
internet
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 is the main reason why humans are being couched potatoes.
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, I contradict
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 statement and I believe that the
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 is playing a key role in improving human's life.
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 with, in the past era
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 did not have technology
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 and due to ,
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 they had to spend an excessive amount of time to accomplish their tasks.
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, in the present age, humans have
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-based gadgets that help them to do their work fast and easily. To put it more simply these days
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 do not have to wait in a queue to buy transport or movie tickets. They can purchase these products on websites through the
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. They
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 do not have to devote time in banks to do financial transactions because it
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 can be done on bank applications with a help of the
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.
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, these days everyone wants to achieve their goals and to get these goals sometimes
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 have to go far away from their family members. During that period when they feel alone, the
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 helps human beings to talk with their loved ones. As we know, nowadays the biggest problem for
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 is greenhouse effects but in
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 some years it been reduced because of the
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.
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, a decade ago
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 had to go to their workspace to complete their work and to turn up on workspace they had to use transport services but in the present era, a lot of
people
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 do their work at home on the
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-based devices. To conclude, I believe that, the
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 is a blessing for human life and it helps
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 to improve their lifestyle and
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 are playing a key role to reducing pressure from population.
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