Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think it is important for them to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
According to some views, teaching school like other
children
at home
can bring better results than traditionally teaching them. However
, other people have opposite views. In my perspective, parents
can encourage children
to learn better than teachers, thus
, home
teaching has more pros than its traditional analogy. This
essay will discuss both sides of view of this
question.
Parents
can build a more appropriate schedule of lessons for their children
, which will take into account children
’s interests and needs. So that this
could help children
to better concentrate on lessens and increase learning ability. For instance
, Tomas Edison had mental diseases and could not attendAdd an article
a
the
children
. For this
reason, he was educated by his mother at home
. It is known, that he became a successful inventor and one of the remarkable people in the world. The success of home
education
is explained by the fact, that parents
have known their children
deepest than any other humans. This
knowledge would help parents
teach their children
more appropriately according to their character and ability, even if they did not have any special degree.
Should be pointed out that some individuals disbelieve in the success of home
education
because they are convinced that parents
do not have a sufficient level of education
to teach hard and humanitarian science. However
, current academic tools allow parents
to upgrade knowledge up to the required level. Moreover
, a contemporary market suggests plenty of books and video materials in a pedagogical sphere, which focus on helping parents
in the teaching process. As in order, all this
information is presented clearly and precisely, thus
, parents
should not have any problem with them. For example
, according to some research, 90% of parents
who had been introduced to this
information before lessons, did not have any problem in explaining subjects. Thus
, mentioned problems can be easily solved by the suggested approach.
In conclusion, the arguments, that have been presented above, clearly prove that home
education
better influences children
's development. In my opinion, the home
education
system is maximally adapted to children
's needs and can bring more positive results in the future.Submitted by ospanovaalma7 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- thirdly
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- moreover
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- however
- although
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