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you just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar. you dont fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree explain ways in which your town is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer

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Dir Sir or Madam, My name is Sara and I am one of your readers who love your newspaper a lot. Actually,
last
 week I read one of your articles
that is
 published
last
 week on December 4th, about all the city centres in my country which was not really true in my opinion. To explain more,
although
 some cities of my country maybe have
a
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 same view, my home town ,which name is
Isafahan
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Isfahan
, is totally different from others.
For example
, our town centre is surrounded by four traditional masques which are famous in the world and
also
 you can see a very big and magnificent park in the middle of it.
At
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 the end, that would be my
honnor
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honour
 to be your tour leader and show the whole of my city to your writer, I am looking forward to receiving your answer. Yours Faithfully, Sara Ahmadi
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