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Your neighbour has written to you to complain about the noise from your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • offer your neighbour an apology • tell them what initiative you will take

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Dear John, I have received your letter and I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you on my behalf.
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, I would use
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 instance to explain my situation behind the incident.
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 of all, I appreciate your kind behaviour for bearing the things without
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 issues. Recently, my sister came from Dubai with her two kids. They have been here for the
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 time.
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, they were so excited about
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 place that make them full-on beans.
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, they have brought a music DJ player and most of the time they are playing Western music in it. Even though it was so good to see them happy, I warned them not to do it again.
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, it seems to be a difficult task,
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, later on, they have managed to do other things
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 as visit the nearby park and go to the music class. Hope you are feeling good now. Once again, I owe my heartfelt sorry for the unlucky incident. Looking forward to your healthy co-operation. Your's faithfully Don
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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