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People are becoming famous with the help of TV programmes and the internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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Nowadays people are becoming popular with the help of TV programmes and the internet. Many bloggers have become famous with the help of social networks as Instagram and TikTok. Of course, the usage of modern technologies can bring some benefits as well as
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drawbacks. I know one Kazakh musician who some years ago created
remix
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 to a famous song “Roses” and just downloaded it to his own Insta account. But his remake had become popular, many people had listened to it, downloaded, resend so after some time that song had appeared on the
first
 lines of the top charts even the
world’s
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. So
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as a result
 the previous year tat man had been awarded Grammy. He had been invited to the USA In fact he is a simple
person
 like we are, but due to the
internet
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 he has become very popular all over the world. His name is Imanbek. But with the popularity come some negative facts as people’s envy. Jealousy,
hatress
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hatred
. Some haters start to write bad, immoral comments under each photo posted
in
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 social networks. I think that
appealing
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person
 should be very calm, tolerant, sometimes in different not paying attention to gossips. And
also
, to my mind if a
person
 is popular the private life is becoming out of the question. All movements are photoed and
then
 posted by
paparazzi
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. A
person
 should always be in a good shape, well dressed, if she is a female, wear constantly
make up
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 if not so the
next
 day that celebrity can be mocked by some journalists. So
in conclusion
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 I’d like to say that thanks to modern technologies people can become popular and famous nowadays.
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