Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extant do you agree or disagree?
The
music
world has seen tremendous growth and variety over the past few decades. People's choices in listening to their favourite songs also
have changed over time as the new ones come by. But many of us would still agree that we always have that, "All-time favourite song of mine list", and these songs act as a thread between the various ethnic and age groups. Despite the difference, I too agree that music
makes all of us as one.
Firstly
, music
provides emotional and mental health benefits. Some instrumentals such
as flute, violin, piano and veena have the power to increase a person's concentration, makes them relax, soothe them at the time of stress, boost mental strength and help a person with insomnia to sleep better. The times have changed, youngsters to elder we all face stress at some point in our life, and these act as stress busters. Hence
, these are some of the qualities of music
which encourages every one of us to listen to it.
On the other hand
, popular musicians are famous all over the world. Some of them such
as Justin Beiber, Selena, Taylor Swift tour all over the world to spread their music
. Surveys have shown that western music
tickets have been sold at higher prices rates than local music
tickets. Their songs and lyrics give us insight into their lifestyles which makes their followers understand them better.
To conclude, the music
market has been lucrative attracting people of all times, making them understand others lifestyles and uniting all of us together.Submitted by sowmiahsr on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite