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New research has shown that overeating has become bigger problem in the world than hunger. What are the reasons foe this problem and how can it be solved?

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Nowadays modern investigation has revealed that overeating has a significant problem in the world than hunger.
However
, it has ultimately
leads
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 to various health-related problems
to
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 the
people
.
Hence
, it can be detrimental
for
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 the human body.
This
 essay
discuss
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about
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the causes and solution for their health hazard.
To begin
 with, due to
economic
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 growth of
the
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society,
people
 have wealthier than before.
However
, they can
spent
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 more money on eating western food like pasta, noodles, pizza, waffles, and so on. Even though
people
 have addicted to eating unhealthy food because of its taste and they are adding a variety of substances into the cuisine.
Secondly
,
people
 have to workhorse, stress, more pressure from various aspects of lives caused to eat a large amount.
For instance
, food health development stated that many
people
 who
is
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 having a
habbit
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habit
 of overeating due to their stress, irrespective of age suffer from eating disorder like bulimia.
Hence
, every individual effort and government have to take necessary action to overcome these issues.
First
 of all, each and everyone must avoid stress and
adopt
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to
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a healthy lifestyle.
Secondly
, government to take required action against the advertisement, which is encouraging the
people
 to spend money on eating cuisine foods. In conclusion, overeating disorder plays a prominent role in spoiling the future generation as well as the wealthy nation.
Hence
, both the administration and
people
 must undertake the responsibility to address
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 issues.
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next
 decade
people
 will affect the many
dieases
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diseases
 in large no of scale.
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