Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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modern era, levels of competition are increasing day by day.

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some individuals believe that

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ought to be taught competitively in school yet some believe that working in a

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and in

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is more crucial in the

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of

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essay discusses both views and

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my personal opinion regarding the above statement. To commence with the reasons why heir should be taught competitively in the academy. Primarily,

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spend maximum time in school so, it is a responsibility of the education system to prepare their students

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to withstand the tough competition of

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in future.

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, many psychologists say that about 80% of school-going

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have a lack of confidence owing to which they have not been able to take their own decision.

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, many teenagers are dependent not only on parents but

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on teachers for obtaining their goals. Paradoxically, some masses ponder that skills that are required in working are teamwork and good

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. In ,fact working with a

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and

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helps students to build social interaction in which they came about to know different ideas to increase their horizon of knowledge.

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, a child who is weak in mathematics should take other

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help to learn their solving ways.

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, many sports require

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members and

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to achieve the

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prize. In essence, games like football, having different

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members that play according to their position in a game.

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, working in a

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makes adolescent

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better in future. In conclusion, in the upbringing of ,

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some people say that competition sounds more likely but

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some believe

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is important in better future

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. According to my perspective view , both skills are compulsory in student

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in their upcoming

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