Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are going on a short training course at a college in New Zealand. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you because I am going on a crash training course at

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institute placed in New Zealand.

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accommodation to stay to complete my study over there. I am Priya. I am decided to study a computer application master-course from your reputed university in the name of Harvard, which is located in New Zealand. Because

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I am totally new to your country.

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, I am expecting a room like a single bedroom with an attached toilet, one small kitchen, one mini balcony, and

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with an internet facility. Even though

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important requirement is my staying place is nearby my university, so I can quickly reach my place.

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, my academic journey will resume

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in the month of February 2022. So kindly arrange the place before that, because that would

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me to arrange my things according to my wish. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Priya.

Submitted by Bhavani Viswanathan on Wed Dec 29 2021

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

161 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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