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Some people say that it’s better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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It is important to teach
language
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 in any educational system.
Although
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 some
people
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 argue that
language
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classes
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 ought to include a few numbers of
students
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, others believe that the number of
students
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 is not significant. I, personally, support the former view. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both perspectives and why I believe that small
classes
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 are better. On one hand, some
people
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 insist that the number of
students
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 in
classes
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 does not have a huge impact on efficiency because
language
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 teaching mainly depends on rote learning and after-class practices.
Students
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 should study at home to memorize vocabulary by heart as well as study the grammar by solving exercises.
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, they are required to communicate with their classmates or
people
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 who have good conduct in the
language
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 for better conversation. Of course, even in small
classes
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, if the
students
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 did not practise the
language
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 outside the school setting, their progress would be slower than their peers who did. In
this
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 respect, school is not the perfect place to practise the
language
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,
therefore
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 the size of the class does not necessarily influence the
students
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. On the one hand, another group of
people
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, as well as I, recommend limiting the number of
students
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 in
language
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classes
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 will largely achieve the learning target.
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 is because the pupils' concentration would be better which makes the class more efficient.
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, they would be able to obtain more information and have better communication with their classmates and teachers.
For example
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, in a study conducted in the USA, when the class contained less than 20
students
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, their control of
language
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 was far better than those in
classes
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 with more
students
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. If the
students
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 are not able to concentrate, they may give up and hate the
language
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.
Thus
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, I believe that small
classes
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 will help the
students
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 pay more attention and will be able to excel in learning the
language
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. In conclusion,
although
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 some
people
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 believe that it is not necessary to teach
language
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 in small
classes
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 because the practice outside school premises is more crucial to develop their
language
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, I still think that small
classes
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 are important to teach
language
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 skills as it provides better concentration and teachers can help
students
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 overcome their weaknesses.
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