Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

There are many people who think wealth does not necessarily guarantee
happiness
. I partly agree with
this
statement. On the one hand, I agree that having a lot of
money
does not ensure
happiness
.
Firstly
, we can not take care of our family, we spend too much time working to earn
money
to serve our ambition.
For instance
, many richest in the world don'
t
have a happy
life
with their wife and they are divorced. They are always busy with their career and only spend almost time per day working
such
as Bill Gates, Elon Musk, Jeff Bezos or many famous actors in the world. So
that is
why they don'
t
have fulfilling
happiness
.
Secondly
,
money
can not buy health or true friends. In fact, even if you are poor, you must be a nice person with a good personality to receive true friendship.
Lastly
, the most important thing in our
life
is freedom. As we know, we are always want to live a free
life
and do whatever we want. We don'
t
need to obey our parents to do some things that they think it is good for us. An example of
this
is the story about Japan princess with her husband. She is against her family to marry a normal man and gave up her Japanese princess position to live a simple
life
as people.
On the other hand
, I disagree with the opinion that wealth does not necessarily guarantee
happiness
. As we know, when we have lots of
money
we can do whatever we want in our
life
.
For example
, if we are seriously ill, we need a lot of
money
for treatment.
Money
cannot buy health, but without
money
, we will die.
Besides
, we have to pay our monthly bills and daily living expenses. So if we are rich we don'
t
have to worry about it and can buy expensive and best quality items. In conclusion, many individuals believe that having a lot of
money
does not necessarily
happiness
. I partly agree with
this
view because it has two sides when we become wealthy.
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