Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement.
There are many people who think wealth does not necessarily guarantee
happiness
. I partly agree with this
statement.
On the one hand, I agree that having a lot of money
does not ensure happiness
. Firstly
, we can not take care of our family, we spend too much time working to earn money
to serve our ambition. For instance
, many richest in the world don't
have a happy life
with their wife and they are divorced. They are always busy with their career and only spend almost time per day working such
as Bill Gates, Elon Musk, Jeff Bezos or many famous actors in the world. So that is
why they don't
have fulfilling happiness
.
Secondly
, money
can not buy health or true friends. In fact, even if you are poor, you must be a nice person with a good personality to receive true friendship. Lastly
, the most important thing in our life
is freedom. As we know, we are always want to live a free life
and do whatever we want. We don't
need to obey our parents to do some things that they think it is good for us. An example of this
is the story about Japan princess with her husband. She is against her family to marry a normal man and gave up her Japanese princess position to live a simple life
as people.
On the other hand
, I disagree with the opinion that wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness
. As we know, when we have lots of money
we can do whatever we want in our life
. For example
, if we are seriously ill, we need a lot of money
for treatment. Money
cannot buy health, but without money
, we will die. Besides
, we have to pay our monthly bills and daily living expenses. So if we are rich we don't
have to worry about it and can buy expensive and best quality items.
In conclusion, many individuals believe that having a lot of money
does not necessarily happiness
. I partly agree with this
view because it has two sides when we become wealthy.Submitted by meomy171 on
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