You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Goldman Paulo, penning down
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letter to express my concerns about my roommate, who has been staying with me for more than months and creating loud noise with their friends and organizing a party every week. The situation is getting worse every day because of the noise level. I am staying in "B" block room number 303, currently sharing it with final year students, located near the library. The issue I am facing currently with my roommate is that he is organizing a party weekly twice with his class friends, Friday and Saturday.
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, I am not able to sleep well and can not focus on my studies.
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, the
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-semester exams are coming
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week and I wanted to revise my academic subjects. To resolve the above issues, I would like you to switch to my roommate or arrange another accommodation at the "A" or "C" block. Which could be more beneficial if I move there. Considering the above reasons, I am looking forward to changing my accommodation as soon as possible to concentrate more on my studies. Thank you for your consideration on
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matter. Yours faithfully,
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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