Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Ragging is becoming a major issue in numerous institutions. The main reason is that seniors want to make impression on newcomers and bullying is
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a part of the fun for some
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. It can be tackled to take strict action like make new policies regarding ragging and impose punishments for doing
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action in
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, bullying is fun for some
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, they do pranks to the new
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. Sometimes,
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are unable to handle these situations and they feel embarrassed in front of others which disturb them mentally and physically. In many cases, sensitive
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commit suicide as a
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option. In recent survey shows about 70% of bullied
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lost their life because of embarrassment and fear.
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,
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week, I read a news in which one student committed suicide because he didn't tolerate the rude behaviour of their fellow ones , when police investigated that matter it cleared that he did
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just because of bullying in university.
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, every problem has some solution, just need to understand the situation
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take appropriate action to resolve it.
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and universities should make a policy regarding ragging so that, everyone can know their rights. It helps many
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who are unable to express themselves in front of others.
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, if
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implement punishment and fine who do bullying in
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maybe it creates fear among the
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. Apart from it,
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should appoint mentors who consult with
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and know about their problems and solve them on time. In conclusion,
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bullying is a part of school life for fun and enjoyment, it takes many life's of Brilliant
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because they fail to handle these situations and many
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are put behind bars who did
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crime . It's high time to be aware the
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regarding these problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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