Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Ragging is becoming a major issue in numerous institutions. The main reason is that seniors want to make impression on newcomers and bullying is
also
a part of the fun for some
students
. It can be tackled to take strict action like make new policies regarding ragging and impose punishments for doing
such
action in
schools
.
Firstly
, bullying is fun for some
students
, they do pranks to the new
students
. Sometimes,
students
are unable to handle these situations and they feel embarrassed in front of others which disturb them mentally and physically. In many cases, sensitive
students
commit suicide as a
last
option. In recent survey shows about 70% of bullied
students
lost their life because of embarrassment and fear.
For example
,
last
week, I read a news in which one student committed suicide because he didn't tolerate the rude behaviour of their fellow ones , when police investigated that matter it cleared that he did
this
just because of bullying in university.
However
, every problem has some solution, just need to understand the situation
then
take appropriate action to resolve it.
Schools
and universities should make a policy regarding ragging so that, everyone can know their rights. It helps many
students
who are unable to express themselves in front of others.
For instance
, if
schools
implement punishment and fine who do bullying in
schools
then
maybe it creates fear among the
students
. Apart from it,
schools
should appoint mentors who consult with
students
and know about their problems and solve them on time. In conclusion,
although
bullying is a part of school life for fun and enjoyment, it takes many life's of Brilliant
students
because they fail to handle these situations and many
students
are put behind bars who did
this
crime . It's high time to be aware the
students
regarding these problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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