Some people think that economic growth is the only solution to stop poverty and hunger, while others think that economic growth is damaging the environment and should be stopped immediately. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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poverty is
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for both the government and their citizen.Some
people
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suggest
that the increase in the
amount
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of goods and services produced per head prevent the
proerty
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property
. while the other
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that
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for
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climate
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the climate
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and must be humbled.
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will look at both sides and give my
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opinion
. The
increasment
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increase
increased
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the economic
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sector is the best option for preventing poverty in the following ways,
Firstly
government builts new production industries and
issue
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issues
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vaccancies
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vacancies
for the poor
people
.
for
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poor
people
get a job
beacause
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because
of the development .which shows good sign.
Secondly
, The cost of the thing
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because
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export material
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so costly than the country own production.
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te
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the
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conomic
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economic
growth
,
government
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the government
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receive taxes and
this
made them
to
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too
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eassy
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easy
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to
destribute
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distribute
funds for
developments
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development
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.
i
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would disagree that
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economic
growth
create
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problem
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a problem
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for
environment
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the environment
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.some economic sectors should be knocked down due to climate change,yet a more sensible solution for
this
problem can be
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the developing
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developing
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forest
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of forest
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.
people
needs
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to grow trees and stop
to
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cutting
the
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tree,
in
addition
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people
need to increase the amount of recycling. so that the environment would be good and clean. To conclude, though economic
growth
produce
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damages for
environment
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the environment
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, their value should not be neglected in light of the above factors,
i
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firmlly
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firmly
believed that the
people
must be doing economic
growth
.
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