Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.  Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Photojournalists are always keen to take photos of high profile personalities which may some people think
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is wrong while others contradict
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statement by arguing that it is just what they are paying price for in the name of fame. In
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views and will support my point of view with examples.
To begin
with, it is far important to not indulge in anyone's personal life by clicking photos of their relations or family time which belongs to extreme personal in nature which I might believe no one going to allow a breach in
this
safe zone.
Therefore
, it is necessary to take strict action on
this
if someone tries to cross
this
borderline.
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, if any renowned person stepping out for dinner or
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lunch with her family there shouldn't
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a space to glamorize
such
events just for the sake of celebrities, because
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act is just only a wastage of time rather than bring out positive aspects of participation which can be useful in many ways
such
as charity work etc.
On the contrary
to
this
, a person with a success especially a screen artist left out some unwashable stories on the minds of their fans. They are inspired by them, whom they follow regularly on the TV screen while entertaining others.
Thus
, it becomes wish of everyone to click a photo with them whenever they got the opportunity to find them unhide. In conclusion, both of these concepts generally prevail in the society and we should have to be careful before getting ourselves into anyone's private life and ,
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celebrities should
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need to keep in mind fame doesn't come with ease, in fact, it brings a flood of people as a fan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invasion of privacy
  • personal space
  • media scrutiny
  • mental health
  • public figures
  • relentless pursuit
  • legal implications
  • ethical considerations
  • tabloid journalism
  • financial gain
  • public interest
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