You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: • give details of your visit to the restaurant • explain the reason for the celebration • say what was good about the food and the service
Letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you
this
letter to express my gratitude for the proper services and comforts of your restaurant and l
want to thank you for serving kindly.
I went to your restaurant with my friends, yesterday. It was the first time that we went because this
area is one of the newest areas where people eat food.Moreover
, this
place is a modern one, as well.
The reason why we visited there was that we celebrated my friend's birthday. She was there as she likes Italian dishes.Also
, my many friends like Italian foods,so none of us weren't dissatisfied with that idea.
The thing that l
liked the best was the courteous waiters who often came to our table and asked about our condition.In addition
, the meals were good and especially very delicious.l
think that the dishes were cooked by professional chefs.
Again, thank you so much for your help.l
greatly appreciate waiters.
Best regards,
Gulasal Tolibova.Submitted by elbeksayfiddinov on
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Coherence & Cohesion
For a higher coherence score, ensure that the paragraphs naturally flow from one to another, connecting ideas with appropriate transitional phrases.
Coherence & Cohesion
While greeting and closing were present, more personalized expressions could enhance the letter's overall tone.
Coherence & Cohesion
Maintain a focused idea in each paragraph, ensuring that each is well-developed and fully elaborated on.
Task Achievement
For a higher task response score, provide more specific details about your visit, including what dishes you enjoyed and why the celebration was significant to you.
Task Achievement
Use a tone that is consistently appropriate for the context of a letter to a restaurant manager, ensuring that it remains formal yet appreciative throughout.