You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

#friend #lives #course #colleges #city #college #accommodation #admission

Dear Ali, I haven'

seen you , since you have moved to London to finish your education, so I miss you so much . Actually, I want to ask you a favour , if you don'

mind. You know that I am studying agriculture engineering and I noticed that one of the colleges in your place delivering a course which is really useful for my major and it would be good for my job progression ,

therefore

, I really want to attend

this

program, if they accept me.

Moreover

, in my research, I noticed that the college isn'

far from your university , so I thought maybe you could help me to find a place for

this

time , absolutely if it doesn'

bother you . In the end , I am looking forward to seeing you in London, and I will really appreciate your job. Best Regards, Sara

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

148 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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