A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities and cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Due to

the

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globalization, many

countires

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countries

have

people

from different areas. Some individuals believe that

this

is good for the fast

growth

of a country while others are completely against it. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I

am completely agree

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with the option that a nation develops more quickly having

mixture

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a mixture

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of

people

from different origins. The

first

reason for the undevelopment of a region with

mixture

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a mixture

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of cultures is understanding especially for developing countries.

People

from

a

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religion would prefer to follow their

culture

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rules over the

another

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other

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and

this

will result in the delay of a decision.

For example

, In

India

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there is a land

vaccant

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vacant

for building a religious place. But due to multiple cultures, some societies are voting to

built

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a temple while others are in favour of a gurudwara.

Therefore

,

this kind

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of issues

are

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creating a gap in the development of a nation.

On the other hand

, when a region

have

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people

from

the

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mixed areas, they keep on celebrating different festivals which makes their life joyful and interesting.

For example

, Christmas is one of the most celebrated

festival

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by individuals irrespective of their religion. Another

countributing

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contributing

factor is that

people

from different

mind set

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mindset

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helps in the fast

growth

of

a

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society by sharing their experience and

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viewpoint

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view point

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. In

US

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,

for instance

, Indian CEO's are running the most

powerfull

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powerful

organizations like Adobe, Microsoft.

Therefore

a country develops more quickly when its residents are from different nations. In nutshell,

Although

there are some issues in the

growth

of a country with

mixed

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a mixed

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population,

A nations

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A nation's growth

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growth

is much faster when it has individuals from multiple origins and

this

is interesting for

population

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the population

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as well which keeps them moving