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Research shows that people now a days sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individual and society?

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 modern era,most
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the
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people
 give less preference to their sleep when compared to the
people
 of
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 days.The
reasons
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 for
this
 kind of problem is,the recent survey
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 by
private
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a private
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organisation
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 gives
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 that most of
middle
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 age persons
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 their
time
 scrolling the social media pages in the
night
 hours.Now coming to the youth,in the
night
 they
usuallygo
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usually go
usually
 for
outtings
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outings
 with their friends and spend the whole
night
 by doing parties.Apart from
this
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people
 who are awake on the
night
time
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major of the
people
 who
lives
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 in cities will do the
night
 shift work in their offices.
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 in the IT
field
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people
 have to do the day and
night
 shifts.All these are reasons for
people
 are spending
their
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less
time
 in sleep. Now,we will discuss the negative effects on
people
's
life
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 and on society.
Firstly
,
by
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 having less sleep will have
the
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 direct impact on
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health.Because the one who
give
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 poor
time
 for their sleep may suffer from
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stress,headaches and many more problems.
Moreover
, mainly on the youngsters will
may
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get effected that they won't be
active
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 whole day and can't able to interest concentrate on studies and won't show much interest in their daily routine things.If individuals and youngsters will suffer from
these kind
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 of problems
then
its
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 impact will have on
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society.Because today's youth is the tomorrows future for our country . To
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,
now a days
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people
 not giving preference to their sleep and suffering from many
illness
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.which had
the
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 impact on
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the individual
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individual
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individuals
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 as well as on society.
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