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Studying alone or in a group which one do you prefer and why?

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Studying is an essential factor for learning and increasing knowledge in every aspect, and it will cause a more successful life. It is usually done individually or in groups. I prefer to
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 in order to learn better in groups. In my opinion,
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 has more advantages than individual learning.
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 in a
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,
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 can learn more because they share different understandings of the subject.
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, in a
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 , members are encouraged to dig deep and more carefully and focus better so they can share the user data.
On the other hand
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, in a
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, you will find the opportunity of teamwork and
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 will increase the experience in future for
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, another advantage of an association
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 is that it motivates you to apply and learn better skills from each other. To read long texts and contents, you can divide the work and have each person read each section and at the end
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 explain the content to each other,
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 saving reading time.
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, the disadvantages of self-learning include non-self-discipline, no face-to-face interaction, lack of flexibility, lack of input from trainers, slow evolution and etc. In the end, it can be concluded that both
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 methods individually or in groups have advantages and disadvantages that depend on the personality of
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, age, and purpose of investigation, type of
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 subject, amount and volume of the
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, my choice is a
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 in order to learn better.
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