You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: • Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

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Hi Cindy, I hope you are well. I'm writing

this

letter to let you know that I will be going

visit

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my parents for a week. As I have been

meantioned

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mentioned

to you before, I need to go back home to celebrate Chinese New Year with my family. So, I hope you can help me to look after my

dog

and my garden while I'm on my

holidays

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holiday

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. Could you please help me to feed my little

dog

twice a day, I will put her

dog

foods

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food

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at the front of the shed

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You just need to give her a cup of

buiscuts

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biscuits

in the morning and evening.

Also

, please give her some fresh water

everyday

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every day

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. For my garden, I

needs

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you to turn the water tape on for an hour in the evening for my flowers.

However

, sometimes my water

systerm

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system

will

stuck

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stick

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with the timmer so, that you need to press the reset button

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apply

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after it will be working again. For my little

dog

, if she can't

finished

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her

foods

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food

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, please don't worry too much, she will eat when she

feel

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feels

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hungry again. If you have any other problems that you

needs

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need

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to discuss with me, please call my mobile 0402043289. Once again thank you for

agree

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agreeing

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to help me to look after my house. I will see

when

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you when

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I come back. Best regards, June

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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17Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

227 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: • Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

In many countries crime rates among teenagers are higher than among other age groups. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to solve it ?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

childhood obesity has now becoming more and more popular

Do you think people are more or less careful with their personal information nowadays compared to the past?

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+