You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: • Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

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Hi Cindy, I hope you are well. I'm writing

this

letter to let you know that I will be going

visit

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my parents for a week. As I have been

meantioned

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mentioned

to you before, I need to go back home to celebrate Chinese New Year with my family. So, I hope you can help me to look after my

dog

and my garden while I'm on my

holidays

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holiday

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. Could you please help me to feed my little

dog

twice a day, I will put her

dog

foods

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food

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at the front of the shed

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You just need to give her a cup of

buiscuts

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biscuits

in the morning and evening.

Also

, please give her some fresh water

everyday

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every day

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. For my garden, I

needs

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need

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you to turn the water tape on for an hour in the evening for my flowers.

However

, sometimes my water

systerm

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system

will

stuck

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stick

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with the timmer so, that you need to press the reset button

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apply

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after it will be working again. For my little

dog

, if she can't

finished

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her

foods

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food

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, please don't worry too much, she will eat when she

feel

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feels

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hungry again. If you have any other problems that you

needs

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need

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to discuss with me, please call my mobile 0402043289. Once again thank you for

agree

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agreeing

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to help me to look after my house. I will see

when

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you when

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I come back. Best regards, June

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1Word repetition
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17Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

227 words

6.50

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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