You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: • Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

Hi Cindy, I hope you are well. I'm writing
this
letter to let you know that I will be going
visit
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my parents for a week. As I have been
meantioned
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mentioned
to you before, I need to go back home to celebrate Chinese New Year with my family. So, I hope you can help me to look after my
dog
and my garden while I'm on my
holidays
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. Could you please help me to feed my little
dog
twice a day, I will put her
dog
foods
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at the front of the shed
.
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You just need to give her a cup of
buiscuts
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biscuits
in the morning and evening.
Also
, please give her some fresh water
everyday
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. For my garden, I
needs
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you to turn the water tape on for an hour in the evening for my flowers.
However
, sometimes my water
systerm
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system
will
stuck
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with the timmer so, that you need to press the reset button
,
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after it will be working again. For my little
dog
, if she can't
finished
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her
foods
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food
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, please don't worry too much, she will eat when she
feel
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hungry again. If you have any other problems that you
needs
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need
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to discuss with me, please call my mobile 0402043289. Once again thank you for
agree
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to help me to look after my house. I will see
when
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you when
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I come back. Best regards, June
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