You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: • Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

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Hi Cindy, I hope you are well. I'm writing

this

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letter to let you know that I will be going

visit

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my parents for a week. As I have been

meantioned

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mentioned

to you before, I need to go back home to celebrate Chinese New Year with my family. So, I hope you can help me to look after my

dog

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and my garden while I'm on my

holidays

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holiday

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. Could you please help me to feed my little

dog

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twice a day, I will put her

dog

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foods

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at the front of the shed

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You just need to give her a cup of

buiscuts

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biscuits

in the morning and evening.

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, please give her some fresh water

everyday

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. For my garden, I

needs

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you to turn the water tape on for an hour in the evening for my flowers.

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, sometimes my water

systerm

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system

will

stuck

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with the timmer so, that you need to press the reset button

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after it will be working again. For my little

dog

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, if she can't

finished

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her

foods

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food

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, please don't worry too much, she will eat when she

feel

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hungry again. If you have any other problems that you

needs

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need

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to discuss with me, please call my mobile 0402043289. Once again thank you for

agree

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to help me to look after my house. I will see

when

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you when

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I come back. Best regards, June

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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227 words

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You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: • Why you want to go away • What you want your neighbor to look after • If there are any problems, then give instructions

People are staying more and more at home, these days. What are the causes and effects.

Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. Which approach do you think has more advantages? Are there any disadvantages to children having a school uniform?

The number of TV programs is growing day by day .some people say that it is good as it is gives people more choices while other say it affect the quality of TV programs discuss both the views and give your opinion

Some people believe that old people should stop working at their 60s, while other sbelieve that they should work as long as they can. to what extent you agree or disagree?

Topic: Some people say it is time to say goodbye to reading books with real paper because e-readers and e-books are available. Do you agree or disagree?