Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays,
people
can use the internet in every place,
as a result
,individuals
work
via the internet.Most of the companies arrange their meetings online.It has some benefits and drawbacks.While working online decreases the transportation problems and employers spend less for their offices but it causes some health issues. Many
people
prefer to be employed through the internet because meanwhile,they can eat or do some chores at
home
.In china women
who
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do online
work
do not need to send their small children to kindergarten
consequently
,they saved some money per month.
Moreover
,company owners do not need
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place
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because many of their
employees
are not at the office.The vehicles congestion will be reduced in cities which their workers and
students
do online working and training ,
therefore
,air pollution diminished there.
On the other hand
,
people
who
work
at
home
usually eat more snacks and food which lead to increasing their weight as we know obesity has lots of health disadvantages
such
as heart diseases and diabetes.Experts researched the rate of obesity in
employees
who are at
home
compared to the workplace ,unfortunately,that illustrated some physical problems which raised in
employees
who
work
at
home
.
Additionally
,communication between individuals declined and most of them only see each other at the computer screen which prevents appropriate bonding between colleagues that will down the job satisfaction.
Although
all of these negative effects can happen for
students
and teachers who
work
online. In conclusion, doing jobs and studying are more comfortable on the computer but
people
face some difficulties.citizens who occupy or train online should be aware of the detrimental impact which online
work
has and manufacturers owners have a duty to help
employees
do some exercise while working.The ministry of education should set up some places for
students
to be familiar with their teachers and other
students
.
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