international tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
While
the
international Correct article usage
apply
tourism
is believed to bring greater revenue to any country’s economy,there is Use synonyms
also
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considerable
amount of negative impacts on locals and the natural serenity.Despite the fact that the tourists impact on the environment Add an article
a considerable
are
arguably debatable,Change the verb form
is
definitely
the disadvantages do not outweigh the advantages.Add a comma
,definitely
This
essay examines the reasons why Linking Words
benefits
of international Correct article usage
the benefits
tourism
can Use synonyms
Add a missing verb
be held
held
its hands up high.
Undeniably,there Wrong verb form
hold
are
a myriad of positive impacts that Change the verb form
is
Use synonyms
tourism
industry can bring in.Correct article usage
the tourism
Firstly
,the economy of the country can be reliant on the market of Linking Words
travel
sector.Evidently,major countries like Singapore,Australia had greatly invested in the infrastructure to attract Add an article
the travel
the
visitors from overseas as these countries have remarkable dependence on the income from the visiting outsiders.Correct article usage
apply
Also
,Linking Words
the
local businesses like local attractions,souvenir retailers,hospitality industries could experience Correct article usage
apply
an
inevitable growth.What’s more,Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
tourism
could help Use synonyms
the
young minds to experience multiculturalism and Correct article usage
apply
therefore
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helps
them to eliminate any developed stereotype.
Wrong verb form
help
In
the same time,there are some negligible drawbacks in inviting people from Change preposition
At
foreign
land.Being unaware of the importance of protecting Add an article
a foreign
sacred
Add an article
the sacred
place
,the holidaying civilians spread Fix the agreement mistake
places
landfill
which could cost more than the expected income.Fix the agreement mistake
landfills
Further
,to make any local attraction to be eye-catchy the more sophisticated amenities should Linking Words
also
be provided.So, more natural Linking Words
habitat
had to be demolished. These disadvantages had to be considered and wisely addressed by implementing careful strategies.Fix the agreement mistake
habitats
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite