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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is a hypothesis about a standard of future public
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 tends to be lower than how it is now. I personally disagree with that assumption. In
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 essay, a discussion upon the aforementioned issue will be explained.
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 with, it is true that
people
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's way of living nowadays is likely to be the cause of their unhealthy lifestyle.
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, those who work on a desk job 8-9 hours a day have a high risk to have office syndrome which could lead to bones and muscles problems in the future. While all the comfortable facilities
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 as food delivery services that bring meals right to our table are so easy by just one click away could do more sloth to
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 and
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 could be the cause of non-communication diseases.
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, I think that
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 could look after themselves better in these modern days due to there
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 more products and services that target those who want to have a healthy lifestyle
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 as keto food packages, gym membership, or annual
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 checkup promotions.
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, healthcare innovations these days are state of the art, which tends to be more effective and productive in the future.
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,
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 would have more alternative ways to choose what is best for their
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. and the modern technologies would be a great help of treating
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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that though there are some challenges that could bring
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's
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 standards down, there are more factors that could help
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 maintain their
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 standard as -is or even better than in the present.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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