The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Cambridge Test IELTS 13 Academic - TEST 1 - Writing Task 1)
The maps show us how the surrounding region and roads of urban hospitals changed between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, we can see two main improvements, one of them, the main and surrounding roads remained unchanged, however
, the intersection of them improved rapidly. Next
, car
parking increased significantly for size and type.
For crossroad: the city road
and medical facility's road
had the intersection in 2007. But it’s transformed by a roundabout. Furthermore
, the crossroad of hospitals road
and ring road
too.
The car
parking: before, the car
parking of staff, public and some bus were together south from hospital and east side of hospital road
. In 2010, the old car
parking became only staff and a new bus terminal is builded on the opposite side of hospital road
. For customers' car
parking, it’s constructed with enough spaces next
to the urban hospital, on the adjacent side of the enclosing hospital road
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