Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opionion.

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With numerous inventions and discoveries, human life in
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world has been progressive for generations. Over the centuries, the
environment
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has been deeply affected
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. A number of people believe that nothing can be done to control the damage.
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, a few still think that certain steps can make a difference. Human being has continued to ignore flora and fauna and has focused on the activities that suit their betterment.
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ignorance has caused irreversible damage.
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, forests have been cleared to create
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a settlement
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settlement
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for
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population that has deprived many
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and birds of their natural homes. Deforestation has created an ecological imbalance.
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, the water bodies and air have been polluted recklessly making life difficult not just for
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and birds but for themselves.
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, many
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are on the brink of extinction as their homes have been taken away from them.
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, several actions can be taken to prevent
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destruction. Biodiversity parks and sanctuaries should be constructed to create
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environment
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for the endangered species. Tree
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plantations
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should be encouraged at all levels to invite
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and birds.
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, the pollution of rivers and seas should be checked to save the lives of aquatic
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. Alternatives should be taken for the proper disposal of the factory and human waste. Ecofriendly goods should be used and recycling should be considered. To conclude, I would say that
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human
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to overlook the
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and
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have caused
a great fury, a lot can still be done to prevent any
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damage. If
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serious actions could be taken now, we can restore the
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and can protect a great number of species to disappear from our planet.
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