Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opionion.

With numerous inventions and discoveries, human life in
this
world has been progressive for generations. Over the centuries, the
environment
has been deeply affected
as a result
. A number of people believe that nothing can be done to control the damage.
However
, a few still think that certain steps can make a difference. Human being has continued to ignore flora and fauna and has focused on the activities that suit their betterment.
This
ignorance has caused irreversible damage.
Firstly
, forests have been cleared to create
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for
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population that has deprived many
animals
and birds of their natural homes. Deforestation has created an ecological imbalance.
Secondly
, the water bodies and air have been polluted recklessly making life difficult not just for
animals
and birds but for themselves.
Furthermore
, many
animals
are on the brink of extinction as their homes have been taken away from them.
However
, several actions can be taken to prevent
further
destruction. Biodiversity parks and sanctuaries should be constructed to create
hospitable
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environment
for the endangered species. Tree
plantation
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should be encouraged at all levels to invite
animals
and birds.
Moreover
, the pollution of rivers and seas should be checked to save the lives of aquatic
animals
. Alternatives should be taken for the proper disposal of the factory and human waste. Ecofriendly goods should be used and recycling should be considered. To conclude, I would say that
although
the
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human
continue
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to overlook the
environment
and
havecaused
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have caused
a great fury, a lot can still be done to prevent any
further
damage. If
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serious actions could be taken now, we can restore the
environment
and can protect a great number of species to disappear from our planet.
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